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- I would like to find a family with 5-8 years children.
- I'm really want my children will learn english language.
- My boy is 6 and my girl is 7 yeas old.

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- I would like to find a family with 5-8 years children.
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- I would like to find a family with ~~5-8 years children~~children between ages of 5 and 8.
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- I'm really want my children will learn english language.
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- I'm really would want my children ~~will~~to learn ethe English language.
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- My boy is 6 and my girl is 7 yeas old.
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- My ~~boy~~son is 6 ~~and my girl~~years old and my daughter is 7 years old.
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