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Golden rain
- Sometime ago, in high school to be more precise, I was in a bus stop minding my own business when I ran into a friend, he was walking his dog, well, we talked for couple of minutes when suddenly I felt something wet and warm streaming down my foot.
It was pee!!! the darn dog just peed on me !!
On that day I had an important exam to do, I had no much time to cleaning myself so I went to school smelling like pee!

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משפט 1
- Sometime ago, in high school to be more precise, I was in a bus stop minding my own business when I ran into a friend, he was walking his dog, well, we talked for couple of minutes when suddenly I felt something wet and warm streaming down my foot.
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- Some time ago~~, in high school~~ --to be more precise, in high school--I was inat a bus stop minding my own business when I ran into amy friend, hewho was walking his dog~~, well, w~~. We talked for a couple of minutes when, suddenly, I felt something wet and warm streaming ~~down~~onto my foot.
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משפט 2
- It was pee!!! the darn dog just peed on me !!
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משפט 3
- On that day I had an important exam to do, I had no much time to cleaning myself so I went to school smelling like pee!
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- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 3