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  • Essay: Disadvantage for work after high school

  • Have students who travel and work after high school advantage compared to who haven't?
  • I think student who work and travel before university, don't have any advantages compared to who haven’t that experience.
  • Students who had delay after high school.
  • First, brain is flexible that mean when people don't have regular study from 6 to 12 month, they knowledge slowly disappear.
  • Second, after school they don't have enough skill to find high paid job, so skills that they are getting from a job won’t use in a university.
  • Students who hadn't delay after high school.
  • First, for compare with people who never work and travel after high school, have advantage, because they pay attention on process of learning and don't have pause to forget most of what they learnt.
  • Second plus is they starting carrier early than who had one or two yeas shift that mean after graduating they will use skills that acquired earlier and have growth in salary early.
  • In my opinion people after high school shouldn't interrupt they process of education.

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