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    • Many as the war between the southern and northern states also know american civil war.
    • The war occurred in the year 1861 and lasted for four year.
    • The war was involving the United States federal government and eleven southern state that claimed their right to break away from the union.
    • Northern states had a developed and growing manufactury coupled with small farms that utilized free labor, and on the other hand, large plantations characterized economy of the south.
  • The southern states had slaves.
    • Northern states, in 1840s wanted to do away with slavery along the western territories in a view of creating new states.
    • This move was opposed by the southern states since they thought that the efforts by the north to block slavery expansion will in the long run endanger on hand slaveholdings in southern states.

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    • Many as the war between the southern and northern states also know american civil war.
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    • Many as the war between the southern and northern states also know american civil war.
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    • Many as the war between the southern and northern states also know american civil warThe American Civil War was a war fought between the United States or simply called North and several Southern states of slaves known as South.
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    • The war was involving the United States federal government and eleven southern state that claimed their right to break away from the union.
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    • The war was involvinged the United States' federal government and eleven southern states that claimed their right to break away from the union.
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    • Northern states had a developed and growing manufactury coupled with small farms that utilized free labor, and on the other hand, large plantations characterized economy of the south.
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    • NThe northern states had a developed and growing manufactury coupled with small farms that utilized free labor, and on the other hand, large plantations characterized economy of the southwhilst the economy of the south was characterized by large plantations .
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    • Northern states, in 1840s wanted to do away with slavery along the western territories in a view of creating new states.
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    • NThe northern states, in 1840s wanted to do away with slavery along the western territories in a view of creating new states.
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    • This move was opposed by the southern states since they thought that the efforts by the north to block slavery expansion will in the long run endanger on hand slaveholdings in southern states.
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    • This move was opposed by the southern states since they thought that the efforts by the north to block slaverythe expansion of slavery will in the long run endanger on hand slaveholdings in the southern states.
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