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She quickly walked down the alley, occasionally looking back.
She was running away from something, but so far no one knew what.
All the people that were looking at it from the windows of regret were afraid to go and ask.
And then he appeared.
- The guy who for several years trying to catch.
He quickly blocked the path of the girl and hugged her. "

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- She quickly walked down the alley, occasionally looking back.
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- She was running away from something, but so far no one knew what.
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- All the people that were looking at it from the windows of regret were afraid to go and ask.
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- And then he appeared.
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- The guy who for several years trying to catch.
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- He quickly blocked the path of the girl and hugged her. "
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