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  • The Birth of Moon Cakes

  • The Middle-Autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China.
    • People do like to eat moon cakes during the day.
  • It is well known that moon cakes symbolize the gathering of friends and families, and are an indispensable part of the offerings made to the Earth God.
    • However, few people really knows the birth of moon cakes.
  • Today, I'd like to share some information with you.
  • According to a popular belief, the custom of eating moon cakes began in the late Yuan Dynasty.
    • At that time, people hated the rule of the Mongolians.
  • An insurrectionary army led by Zhu Yuanzhang planned to overthrow the rule of Yuan Dynasty.
  • Zhu needed to find a way of uniting the people to revolt in secret.
  • Zhu's advisor came up with a brilliant idea-creating moon cakes to deliver secret messages.
    • In this way, the insurrectionary army successfully started a uprising to drive the ruler away.
  • It happened at the time of full moon, which may explain why people eat moon cakes on this day.
  • From then on, moon cakes have become an important part of the Middle-Autumn Festival.
  • Traditional moon cakes are made with melted lard.
  • But vegetable oils are more often used today, which are better for our health.
    • Those moon cakes are usually put in four boxes to indicate moon's changing course.

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