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Сообщение от AngelaZZ - English

  • My sister

  • It's really hard to know my sister.
    • She is quiet, cool, and in some ways quiet unapproachable, which make me misunderstood her for many years.
    • When i was child, i confirmedly believed that i must be her most hated enemy.
    • She should have had the whole family's love, she should have had all things she wanted.
  • But everything changed because of me.
  • She had to give up the special gifts or the tasteful food just because i like it.
    • "she hates me!" i thought it when she rejected me to doing my homework, which made me staying up to 3 o'clock.
  • She smiled when she met me the next morning, she must think i deserve it.
    • She must hate me so much that she never told me the unhappy things about her.
    • I didn't know why, i liked to tell her my sad things although i thought she may don't want to hear it.
  • She was silent when i was speaking, and just said that it's gonna be alright to show she was listening.
    • I didn't know why would i feel so sad when i saw her tears for the first time, also the last time.
    • It was not until then did i know her deep love to me.
  • That's her, always seems to be strong enough to protect me, always love me, in her quiet way.

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