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Text from celine0710 - English

  • An adventurous person

  • I got to know about this adventurous person from Internet—or rather—her blog.
    • She is not only a 22-years-old college girl, the same age as me, but also an experienced backpacker who is always on her road to explore the world, carrying a little sum of money.
  • For example, in 2011, she started her journey alone to Thailand.
  • With only 1600 yuan, she traveled around the whole country within 11 days.
  • During her journey, she thumbed the ride, slept in the railway station and ventured into the unknown forest.
    • Besides, she wrote all of her experiences in her blog and encourage others to discover the world in their own ways and never be afraid of different cultures.
  • I am so impressed by these articles and started my trip in Europe this year.
    • And now, I am a little bit crazy about paraglider which can provide me a new angle of view seeing the world but of course in the condition of security.

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    • She is not only a 22-years-old college girl, the same age as me, but also an experienced backpacker who is always on her road to explore the world, carrying a little sum of money.
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    • She is not only a 22-years-old college girl, the same age as me, but also an experienced backpacker who is always on her road to explore the world, carrying a little sum of money.
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    • Besides, she wrote all of her experiences in her blog and encourage others to discover the world in their own ways and never be afraid of different cultures.
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    • Besides, she wrote all of her experiences in her blog and. She encourages others to discover the world in their own ways and to never be afraid of different cultures.
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    • And now, I am a little bit crazy about paraglider which can provide me a new angle of view seeing the world but of course in the condition of security.
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    • And now, I am a little bit crazy about paraglidering, which can providgive me a new angle of viewperspective on seeing the world b. But of course in the condition of security. , I'll be safe when I go paragliding.
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