Ispravci

POMOZITE PREVESTI SADA!Ispravljena

Poruka od silveroul - English

  • My Favorite Weather.

    • I really love the Fall so much.
    • In this weather, the sky is clear.
  • The atmosphere is cool.
    • Sometimes, you can see leafs fall from the trees and feel the wind gets throght your hands.
  • It is a romantic view!
    • That always make me happy and comfortable.
  • During the Fall, I like drawing.
    • Because all of my paintings are inspired by the Autumn.
    • But after all, my country don't have the weather which called " Autumn".
    • Four seasons are just sunny or rainy, nothing special.
    • So, I have to imaged how the Autumn is.
    • That is the only way for me to draw my paintings about it.
    • Anyway, I wished I had a opportunity to see a true Autumn in my country.

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