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sad
- I was good freand, which helped to me whith English languag.
- Now he very busy. i whant supplication someone help me..
- I am very sad(((

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- I was good freand, which helped to me whith English languag.
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- I ~~was~~had a good frieand, wh~~ich~~o helped to me whith my English language.
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- I ~~was~~had a good frieand, wh~~ich~~o have helped ~~to me whith E~~me for the english language.
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- Now he very busy. i whant supplication someone help me..
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- ~~Now he~~But Now a days, He is very busy. iI whant to supplicat~~ion~~e for someone who can help me..
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- I am very sad(((
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- I am very sad(((¶ ¶Don't be sad, a true friend is always waiting for you :)¶(^0^)/" You got many friends now.
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- I am very sad(( :(¶ ¶
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