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  • The sad end of a love story

  • There was a nice couple who lived together for more than 1 year and half, they loved each other so much and even more than anything else in the world but eventually that relation sadly was broken, the story started when a young man admired a girl through the internet. he didn't hesitate to get to know her and to get close. she was very surprised when he admitted to her that he fell in love with her because it was the first time to meet . she wondered and many questions came to her mind immediately" how did he fall in love with me this quick"?!!. day by day they kept talking and meeting online to discover more and more about each other's characters. till that time it was only a friendship no more. after a short time of discussing and sharing their lives to each other they finally decided to turn their friendship to a love relationship. this relation continued without any hinders at the beginning of it just before the jealousy of love goes to the extremist way and brings up troubles. despite those troubles were happening almost every day and messing the good times that they wanted to spend together but the relation was going ok .they stood everything for the sake of love to go on. the young man was really confused of her excessive jealousy. he almost cut all his relations with others including his friends . all those pressures on him pushed him to the wrong way. the way of cheating and treason. he started to create a fake accounts to feel more free and to break that jail in where he was imprisoned . he tried to hide all what he was doing away of his girlfriend's sight, even though he was mistaken by going this way . he thought this is the only way to breathe for a little and to keep his relation with girlfriend rather telling her the truth that he's unable to stand more and this might put their relation on line . day by day she found out what's he doing on her back and caught him cheating her. it was a big shock for her which caused alot of pains and it was the end

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  • Zdanie 1
    • There was a nice couple who lived together for more than 1 year and half, they loved each other so much and even more than anything else in the world but eventually that relation sadly was broken, the story started when a young man admired a girl through the internet. he didn't hesitate to get to know her and to get close. she was very surprised when he admitted to her that he fell in love with her because it was the first time to meet . she wondered and many questions came to her mind immediately" how did he fall in love with me this quick"?!!. day by day they kept talking and meeting online to discover more and more about each other's characters. till that time it was only a friendship no more. after a short time of discussing and sharing their lives to each other they finally decided to turn their friendship to a love relationship. this relation continued without any hinders at the beginning of it just before the jealousy of love goes to the extremist way and brings up troubles. despite those troubles were happening almost every day and messing the good times that they wanted to spend together but the relation was going ok .they stood everything for the sake of love to go on. the young man was really confused of her excessive jealousy. he almost cut all his relations with others including his friends . all those pressures on him pushed him to the wrong way. the way of cheating and treason. he started to create a fake accounts to feel more free and to break that jail in where he was imprisoned . he tried to hide all what he was doing away of his girlfriend's sight, even though he was mistaken by going this way . he thought this is the only way to breathe for a little and to keep his relation with girlfriend rather telling her the truth that he's unable to stand more and this might put their relation on line . day by day she found out what's he doing on her back and caught him cheating her. it was a big shock for her which caused alot of pains and it was the end
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