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- My name is Ievgeniia This link recommendated friend.
- I want learn English fast, because i want go the other country.
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- Hello!
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句子 2
- My name is Ievgeniia This link recommendated friend.
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- My name is Ievgeniia~~¶¶This link recommendated~~. A friend recommended me this site./This site was recommended to me by my friend./ I discovered this site thanks to my friend.
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- I want learn English fast, because i want go the other country.
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- I ~~want~~have to learn English fast, because ~~i want go the~~I'd like to travel to other countryies.
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- My English very bad(
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