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- hello..i´m new in this place,i would like meet friends here and know them in Seville,please,tell me when you are coming,thank you very much for colaborate

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- hello..i´m new in this place,i would like meet friends here and know them in Seville,please,tell me when you are coming,thank you very much for colaborate
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- hHello~~..i´~~! I am new into this place,i. I would like to meet friends here and get to know them in Seville,p.Please, tell me when ~~you are com~~are you visiting,t?Thank you ~~very~~so much for your collaborateion.
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