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Hello everyone
Hello!
My name is Sergey, I am 29 years old and I live in Ukraine.
- I am looking for someone to help me improve my (Pre-Intermediate) English.
I could help you with Russian or Ukrainian

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- My name is Sergey, I am 29 years old and I live in Ukraine.
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- I am looking for someone to help me improve my (Pre-Intermediate) English.
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- I am looking for someone to help me to improve my (Pre-Intermediate) English.
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- I could help you with Russian or Ukrainian
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