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- the new experiance in Houston
- Hi, a'm Maria Teresa and i come in Houston for few days; I'm happy for the new experience and i need of the your help for improve my english lenguage!
Have a nice time

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- Hi, a'm Maria Teresa and i come in Houston for few days; I'm happy for the new experience and i need of the your help for improve my english lenguage!
  赶紧投票吧！
- Hi, aI'm Maria Teresa and iI'm come ing to Houston for a few days; I'm happy ~~for~~with the new experience and i need ~~of the~~ your help ~~for~~to improve my english leanguage!
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- Have a nice time
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