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new year night
- That delightful feeling when you take a walk beyond dark and at the same time full of light streets of a big city at 4am.
There are no people there and so pacified.
- The time is stopped and seems like you are alone in this whole world...amazing

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- That delightful feeling when you take a walk beyond dark and at the same time full of light streets of a big city at 4am.
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- That delightful feeling when you take a walk ~~beyond~~after dark and at the same time full of light from the streets of a big city ~~at 4am~~.
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- There are no people there and so pacified.
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- The time is stopped and seems like you are alone in this whole world...amazing
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- The time ihas stopped and it seems like you are alone in this ~~whole~~ world...amazing !
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