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  • Our age of technological progress has significantly impacted on all spheres of life and, first of all, It has influenced ways of communication between people.
  • With appearance of the Internet and mobile phones handwriting letters have dramatically dropped in popularity.
  • There will be set some arguments of the problem in this essay.
  • Certainly, modern connections, such as networks, electronic post, short mobile massages and others, have many advantages in front of traditional way of connection.
  • There are no doubt that mails and sms are quicker than usual letters.
  • For example, even if you are far from your family or friends, you can be keeping in touch all time.
  • It does not matter what is the part of world you are and what is time using the Internet you would talk with your folks, if you wanted.
  • Also different from handwriting letters, which can be used by only people who have a high level of literacy, electronic massages can be employed by all people, because besides typing letters you can communicate using smiles and your own voice, all that do not demand special grammatical knowledge.
  • However, there are people who are still writing letters with help of paper and pen.
  • The consider that such way is more better, because the Internet is killing spirituality between people.
  • When you write a letter yourself you add some own feelings to one.
  • Overall, Each of us want to spend more time with our relatives, buy not always we are permitted to do this because of the modern path of life.
  • Therefore I strongly believe that our dream is come true with the latest communications.
  • All of these make our life simpler and happier.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • Our age of technological progress has significantly impacted on all spheres of life and, first of all, It has influenced ways of communication between people.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
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  • Frazo 4
    • Certainly, modern connections, such as networks, electronic post, short mobile massages and others, have many advantages in front of traditional way of connection.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
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  • Frazo 7
    • It does not matter what is the part of world you are and what is time using the Internet you would talk with your folks, if you wanted.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Also different from handwriting letters, which can be used by only people who have a high level of literacy, electronic massages can be employed by all people, because besides typing letters you can communicate using smiles and your own voice, all that do not demand special grammatical knowledge.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
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    • Overall, Each of us want to spend more time with our relatives, buy not always we are permitted to do this because of the modern path of life.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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