Text from THAODE - English
The value of travel
- My biggest dream is becoming a tour guide.
- There are 2 reasons to explain for this.
- The first one: I love learning foreign languages.
- I always have a serious thought in my mind: "The more languages you master, the more chances you get in the future".
- The second is more important: I love traveling.
- I want to have many chances to set foot on other lands in the world.
- Above all, I know clearly about the value of travel.
- One person once said: "Travel is a means of education". That's right.
- Because the more lands you visist, the more knowledge you can acquire.
- Each land has their own cultures, natural beauty.
- Even if you can know them through books, radio news, television,.... you still can't know them as clearly as the native people living in those lands.
- Traveling helps us feel the value of life directly with your own eyes.
- You know, confidence is an important factor in someone's success.
- Yet it takes time and patience for them to improve their confidence.
- While traveling is considered as the most effective way for many people to improve their confidence.
- During the time visiting other lands, they'll have many chances to make contact with others.
- It's also a precious chance for them to learn how to use a new language fluently.
- We can have further knowledge about the cultures through the way native people live, socialize,....
- Traveling helps us see things with our own eyes.
- Thus, we are able to make correct decisions and protect our own ideas in any arguments.
- It also contributes to form your own self-belief.
- I know that it takes time and a lot of money to travel anywhere so some people can't afford to do that despite their desire.
- But, in my opinion, time and money spent on travel as a means of education is worth it.
- ^^ (P/S: it's too long and boring for you to correct.
- Sorry for this :(
- THAODESeptember 2013Voĉdoni nun!
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