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從Lisa_Summmers來的文本 - English

  • help help help!

    • Don’t try to do smth unpleasant to you only to earn more money or to justify your parent’s dreams and so on.
  • Do only those things that you desire to do.
    • Sometimes it can be not so easy.
    • If a person want to be a tv star he should overcome a plenty of difficulties to become a distinguished and high-paid person.
    • And this person shouldn’t be afraid of his dream and be purposeful.

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