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My hometown
The town where I live is Varese, it's also called "the garden city" because there are lots of plants and public gardens.
It's surrounded by small mountains and there's an astronomic observatory in the regional park of "Campo dei fiori".
The "Dolce Varese" is a typical cake made with simple ingredients such as flour, chopped almonds and icing sugar.
I like living in my town but I would like to travel a lot in America, United Kingdom and Australia.

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- The town where I live is Varese, it's also called "the garden city" because there are lots of plants and public gardens.
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- It's surrounded by small mountains and there's an astronomic observatory in the regional park of "Campo dei fiori".
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- The "Dolce Varese" is a typical cake made with simple ingredients such as flour, chopped almonds and icing sugar.
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- I like living in my town but I would like to travel a lot in America, United Kingdom and Australia.
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