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  • When I was a child I wanted to be a singer, an actress, a ballet dancer, a model, a cloth designer, an architect, a photographer, a composer, a pianist, a band-master, a film director and even an astronaut!
  • I used to be captivated with all these things.
  • Finally I’ve chosen a music industry, because I m keen on it, it is always in demand and one can get a good profit out of it.
  • So now I have more or less clear directions for my future career: it should be a public work connected with languages and music industry.

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    • When I was a child I wanted to be a singer, an actress, a ballet dancer, a model, a cloth designer, an architect, a photographer, a composer, a pianist, a band-master, a film director and even an astronaut!
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    • Finally I’ve chosen a music industry, because I m keen on it, it is always in demand and one can get a good profit out of it.
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    • So now I have more or less clear directions for my future career: it should be a public work connected with languages and music industry.
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