Korrekturen

Text von Winnie03 - English

  • A letter answering a request.

    • Dear Vanessa, I read your e-mail and it caught my complete attention because I love protecting the environment as well as you've been doing so far.
    • It's such an interesting petition you've made and I'm sure we will stop that plan from the town council because I've just signed against them at the e-mail you gave me.
    • It seems to me that we have to get more people involved tonhave an stronger support and in that way the town council coud give in to your petition.
  • We could get that people throughout events such as, concerts, fests or picnics by the coastline to show them what would be destroyed by the town council if its plan were executed.
    • Well, that's all for now. All the best. Aaron

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  • Satz 1
    • Dear Vanessa, I read your e-mail and it caught my complete attention because I love protecting the environment as well as you've been doing so far.
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    • Dear Vanessa,¶I read your e-mail and it caught my complete attention. This is because I love protecting the environment as well as you've been doing so farjust like you.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1
  • Satz 2
    • It's such an interesting petition you've made and I'm sure we will stop that plan from the town council because I've just signed against them at the e-mail you gave me.
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    • It'sYou have made such an interesting petition you've made and. I'm sure we will stop thate plan froms the town council because I'vemade. I just signed the petition against them that the e-mail you gave meyou sent to me via e-mail..
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
  • Satz 3
    • It seems to me that we have to get more people involved tonhave an stronger support and in that way the town council coud give in to your petition.
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    • It seems to me that we haveneed to get more people involved tonhave an stronger support and in that way the town council coud give in toin support of your petition. In doing so, the town council will have to concede and support your petition.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3
  • Satz 4
    • We could get that people throughout events such as, concerts, fests or picnics by the coastline to show them what would be destroyed by the town council if its plan were executed.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4
  • Satz 5