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    • Vocation in Bali Part One

    • Last month I Went to Around the Java Island and for the last moment I visit in Bali Island.
    • I really excited for this vocation, it's the first experience which unforgettable.
    • Bali is one of famous island in Indonesia.
    • Bali is beautiful island because there's many culture especially traditional Bali culture.
    • The peoples in there so friendly and humble.
    • I must go there for the next time and everybody must go Bali too.

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