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Sony ExperiaZ1(エクスペリアZ1)
I'm looking forward to launch of Experia Z1.
It is a flagship model of Sony.
Sony contributed a wide range of technology into Experia Z1, according to their destination "One Sony".
Actually, Sony doesn't big share in this market, especially North America and China.
However, I think Z1 is higher-spec than ever before.
I hope Z1 becomes a good rival of iPhone and Galaxy.
(This is not a direct translation) SonyのスマホExperiaZ1の発売が楽しみです．ここで電気屋を見ていると，SonyのスマホはAppleやSamsung, LGなどに次いで４番手・５番手といった印象ですが，Z1に期待しています！

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- I'm looking forward to launch of Experia Z1.
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- It is a flagship model of Sony.
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- Sony contributed a wide range of technology into Experia Z1, according to their destination "One Sony".
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- Actually, Sony doesn't big share in this market, especially North America and China.
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- However, I think Z1 is higher-spec than ever before.
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- I hope Z1 becomes a good rival of iPhone and Galaxy.
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- (This is not a direct translation) SonyのスマホExperiaZ1の発売が楽しみです．ここで電気屋を見ていると，SonyのスマホはAppleやSamsung, LGなどに次いで４番手・５番手といった印象ですが，Z1に期待しています！
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