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  • Home

    • It's the place where everybody wants to get after a hard day of work or school.
  • What am I talking about?
    • Our own little home with their own special things that make it perfect for us.
    • It doesn't matter if you're single, engaged or married, most of us love the place we know most.
    • If it's just chilling on the couch with a good film on tv, or sadly do houseworks, we know it's ours. We own it!
    • And nobody can take us this sign of freedom (except you haven't paid back the credit).
    • The specific home of everybody of us is the place, where we can cry, love, laugh and of course:Live!

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