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Text from sarahB73 - English

  • A beautiful scene

    • I was in Africa when I saw the most amazing scene ever.
    • I was going for a walk with friends of mine and we were climbing up a hill into the bush.
  • It was around 6 PM and we were watching at the sunset.
  • The view became breathtaking with the wide and cloudy sky above us.
    • The clouds were set on fire with red and golden tones, then the sky turned bright with shadowy scarlet light shapes in.
    • Zebu cow figures were passing through the land on the horizon.
  • It was just a fantastic afterglow panorama!

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