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- Hallo,I'm Kate.Me 12.I live in Kiev,in Ukraine.I love swimming, and I go to swimming pool.Bye,continue tomorrow)

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- Hallo,I'm Kate.Me 12.I live in Kiev,in Ukraine.I love swimming, and I go to swimming pool.Bye,continue tomorrow)
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- Hallo,I'm Kate.Me 12.I live in Kiev, in Ukraine. I love swimming, and I go to swimming pool.~~Bye,continue tomorrow)~~ My best friend name is Polina, she amazing, becouse I lot funny with her.
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- Hallo,I'm Kate.~~Me 12.~~ I am 12 years old. I live in Kiev, in Ukraine. I love swimming, a~~nd I go to~~t the swimming pool. Bye, and I'll continue tomorrow).
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