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  • I was happy to get your email.
  • I consider, that's will be good for you to lose some weight.
  • It makes you feel better.
  • Here are some things you can try to do.
  • First of all, it would be good if you reduce the intake of junk food.
  • You need to eat healthier.
  • For example, meat, fish, eggs, milk, vegatables and fruits.
  • These products contain only healthy substances.
  • Another recommendation is to do physical exercises every day or 3 times in a week.
  • I know that you have less of time but it is a good way to lose weight.
  • Last but not least, to have a calm mind.
  • You need to sleep well because it will refresh your mind so you can be active for the next day.
  • I hope these ideas will help.
  • And do not forget if you want your dreams will come true you have to act and believe in yourself.

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