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  • Emotion and Health

    • How emotion acts to affect the human healthy has gradually become valued in medical therapies with more increasing cases of psychoses and neuroses in the modern society.
  • Although there are a variety of researches conducted by the modern western medicine, in fact, an obsolescent ancient medicine-the conventional Chinese medical theories also can provide some means feasible to understand the complex relationship and the mechanism.
  • Since humankind left the natural environment and settled in artificial urban with huge buildings praising our higher science and civilization, it seems that we have forgotten and deserted our precious instincts, little by little; more precisely, unfortunately, we also deprived of the experiences and the knowledge accumulated by our ancients in the meantime.
  • According to those theories, around human life are the energy pessimistic inhibits us from moving on, and the other optimum drives us to strive to be successful.
  • Both of them play relatively interactive characters to each other; therefore, as they normally function together, they maintain our daily healthy.
  • Inside human minds and bodies exist seven main emotional factors having causing various physical and mental diseases affecting the human health, and thus further threat their lifes.
  • These factors, with given professional terms of the conventional Chinese medical theories, are so- called joy, anger, sorrow, worry, grief, fear, and fright.
  • Which of they consist of many complex subunits having positive energy and negative energy combines with one another, and responses to the specialized physiological mechanism of human body.

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    • How emotion acts to affect the human healthy has gradually become valued in medical therapies with more increasing cases of psychoses and neuroses in the modern society.
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    • How emotion acts to affect the human healthy has gradually become valued in medical therapies with more increasing, as cases of psychoseis and neuroseis in the modern society continue to increase.
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    • Although there are a variety of researches conducted by the modern western medicine, in fact, an obsolescent ancient medicine-the conventional Chinese medical theories also can provide some means feasible to understand the complex relationship and the mechanism.
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    • Since humankind left the natural environment and settled in artificial urban with huge buildings praising our higher science and civilization, it seems that we have forgotten and deserted our precious instincts, little by little; more precisely, unfortunately, we also deprived of the experiences and the knowledge accumulated by our ancients in the meantime.
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    • According to those theories, around human life are the energy pessimistic inhibits us from moving on, and the other optimum drives us to strive to be successful.
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    • Both of them play relatively interactive characters to each other; therefore, as they normally function together, they maintain our daily healthy.
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    • Inside human minds and bodies exist seven main emotional factors having causing various physical and mental diseases affecting the human health, and thus further threat their lifes.
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    • These factors, with given professional terms of the conventional Chinese medical theories, are so- called joy, anger, sorrow, worry, grief, fear, and fright.
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    • Which of they consist of many complex subunits having positive energy and negative energy combines with one another, and responses to the specialized physiological mechanism of human body.
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