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  • English Sentences Seeking Correction - Part 3

  • Everything comes when it must come whether you want to accept it or not, it just comes into your life, and then somehow or greatly affect you and your life whether you perceive the change or not.
  • We always pray things come to us are all good, at least, they would not hurt us, and pray bad things go far away from us.
  • On the contrary, unfortunately, hardly can we escape from the subtle destiny always playing a jock on us.
  • Definitely, we even have to admit that the jock is so complex, or even so sophisticate that we fall into the abyss of despair sometime.

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  • 문장 1
    • Everything comes when it must come whether you want to accept it or not, it just comes into your life, and then somehow or greatly affect you and your life whether you perceive the change or not.
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  • 문장 2
    • We always pray things come to us are all good, at least, they would not hurt us, and pray bad things go far away from us.
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    • Definitely, we even have to admit that the jock is so complex, or even so sophisticate that we fall into the abyss of despair sometime.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4