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- presentation about me
- hi !
- My name is Manon !
- I want to learn english for a big trip in USA and because i like this country, i like London city to, but i'm so bad in english so i don't speak very well.
- I'm funny girl, i've got20 years, and i like video games, sport, shopping and travel !
I study journalism in France.

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- hi !
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- My name is Manon !
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- I want to learn english for a big trip in USA and because i like this country, i like London city to, but i'm so bad in english so i don't speak very well.
  투표하세요!
- I want to learn eEnglish for a big trip in the USA and in UK (London) because iI like thisose countr~~y, i like London city to, but i'm so~~ies to travel with. But, I've a bad ~~in e~~English so iI don't speak ~~very~~English well.
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- I want to learn eEnglish for a big trip into the USA, and because iI like this country~~, i~~. I like London city too, but iI'm so bad ~~in e~~at English ~~so i~~and I don't speak it very well.
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- I want to learn english for a big trip in the USA and because i I like this country~~, i~~. I like the London city too, but iI'm so bad in english ~~so i~~and I don't speak it very well.
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- I want to learn eEnglish for a big trip in ~~USA and~~America and I love the city of London because iI likove this country~~, i like London city to, but i'm so bad in english so i don'~~ but my English is very poor so I cannot speak very well.
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- I want to learn eEnglish for a big trip ~~in USA and~~to the US because iI like this country~~, i~~. I like London ~~city to, but i'm so bad in english so i~~too. But my English is so bad, which means I don't speak very well. This worries me.
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- I'm funny girl, i've got20 years, and i like video games, sport, shopping and travel !
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- I'm funny girl, iI've got 20 years, and iI like video games, sports, shoppings and travel !s.
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- I'm funny girl, ~~i've got20 years~~I'm 20, and iI like video games, sports, shopping and travel !
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- I'm a funny girl, ~~i've got~~I'm 20 years, old and iI like video games, sports, shopping and travel ing!
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- I'm funny girl~~, i've got~~ and 20 years~~, and~~ old. i like video games, sport, shopping and travel !
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- I'm a funny girl~~, i've got~~. I'm 20 years, old and iI like video games, sport, shopping and travel !
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- I study journalism in France.
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