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    • computing of elderly

    • Hi, somebody to correct me please? thank you Bonjour, y a t'il quelqu'un pour me corriger ? merci Many elderly have never used a computer in there life.
  • Lots of them are afraid to start with a computer because it asks for skills to adapt itself and to learn computing.
    • Computing allows elderly to follow technological headways.
    • A lots of softwares and applications allow to communicate with friends and to surf on Web.
    • Furthermore, use computer allow personal satisfaction.
    • Computing aimed at the elderly is developing because news computers’ with Linux operating system called “SimplicITY computer” allows an easier and more clearly system for these novices’ people.
    • To conclude, there is no age to begin news activities.
    • Computing is a real asset for elderly.

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