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  • I want to travel

    • I am thinking about traveling in January to Europe.
  • I know it is going to be very cold but I need new experiences.
    • Here in Brazil the wheather is very hot, specially in Rio.
    • Even now, in the middle of de autumn we have days with thirty two degrees Celsius.
    • Although it is too hot I like here, we have amazing beaches and the nature surrounds us.
    • I love my coutry but I want to travel and maybe live abroad to have some different opportunities and experiences. Thank you!

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