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    • My neighborhood have something that i need that is reason for me to live and i will really feel regret if leaving here.
    • I am accustomed to living and proud of everything here except for distance between rich and poor.
    • But I think wherever like that, so no matter what happening, I am still going to live here for good.

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    • My neighborhood have something that i need that is reason for me to live and i will really feel regret if leaving here.
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    • My neighborhood haves something that i need that is the reason for me to live here and i will really feel regrets if I leaving here.
    • My neighborhood haves something that i need, that is reason for me towhy I live here and iI willould really feel regret if lehaving herto leave.
    • My neighborhood haves something that i need; that is reason for me to live and i willI live here and would really feel regret if leaving here.
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  • 문장 2
    • I am accustomed to living and proud of everything here except for distance between rich and poor.
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    • I am accustomed to living here and proud of everything here except for distathe class differences between rich and poor.
    • I am accustomed to living here and proud of everything here except for distathe class differences between the rich and poor.
    • I am accustomed to living andhere and am proud of everything here except for distance the noticeable difference in the standard of living between the rich and poor.
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  • 문장 3
    • But I think wherever like that, so no matter what happening, I am still going to live here for good.
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    • But I think wherever like thatit's the same everywhere, so no matter what happenings, I am still going to live here for good.
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