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    • My neighborhood, which is countryside, is interesting and not expensive for me to live.
    • This is a place where i have been living since I was 6 years old.
    • It is as well as other rural areas.
    • Also, there are ponds, fields, small houses and something like that.
    • Nowadays on side of that things are buildings, companys, factories and some industrial zones.
    • The fast industrialization make person become busy and hurried up.
  • But that thing brings services to anyone such as supermarkets, hospital, education system and transportation system.
    • On the other hand, it also brings pollution to here.
    • However, yearly more people from other areas come here in order to live and work.
  • Life in my neighborhood works all day and night.
  • You can hear vehicle running, see elders exercise, smell the smoke of noodle;"phở" stores in the morning, it's amazing.
    • Especially, the wonder is night life.
  • About 7:00 pm, fashion shops, coffee shops, "quán nhậu" and karaokes open and the life begin.
  • Only one just only one Tet holiday, my neighborhood seems quite because all everyone go back their hometown.
  • I am imagine, that time my neighborhood is sleeping.
  • Sometimes, there are discount fairs near my house, this is oppotunity for everyone to buy cheap things but quality , while adults are buying something, their children are romping.
  • Everybody is very close-knit.
  • Especially festivals, every time the middle-fall or the New year all my neighbor give me food, gift, good wishes and vice versa.
    • They are very kind and friendly.
    • Some of them is ethnic group-chinese, cantonese, cambodian...my family is also cantonese, so i am very proud of my neighbors.
  • It is diversity of culture that make solidarity and attraction in neighborhood.
    • Although i am a mordern person; live in mordern life and must run mordern trends, i still hear language that mothers sing for their baby when they sleep everyday, still see anyone go fishing below bamboo.
  • I love simplicity and tradition.

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