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- hey everybody
- hello, i'm Devin. i'm From Indonesia.
- now, i'm studying Information System as my major at the campus.

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- hey everybody
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- hHey eEverybody.
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- hello, i'm Devin. i'm From Indonesia.
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- hHello, ~~i'm~~my name is Devin~~. i~~, I'm Ffrom Indonesia.
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- now, i'm studying Information System as my major at the campus.
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- ~~¶now, i'm studying Information System as my major at the campus.~~ I'm currently studying (majoring in) Information System, at the University (College)
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