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- My purpose
Hello!
My name is Shamil.
- I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to lean english to continue education at residenture in foreign countries.
I want to be a cardiothoracic surgeon.

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- My purpose
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- My purpose(I would use My goal).
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- Hello!
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문장 2
- My name is Shamil.
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- I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to lean english to continue education at residenture in foreign countries.
  투표하세요!
- I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to learn eEnglish to continue education ~~at residenture~~during my residence period in foreign countries.
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- I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to learn english to continue education atduring residen~~ture~~cy in foreign countries.
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- I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to learn english to continue my education atnd residen~~ture~~cy in foreign countries.
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- I am a student of Moscow medical university, and I want to learn eEnglish in order to continue education atnd residen~~ture~~cy in foreign countries.
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- I am a student ofat Moscow mMedical uUniversity, and I want to learn eEnglish to continue my education at ~~residenture~~institutions in foreign countries.
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- I want to be a cardiothoracic surgeon.
  투표하세요!
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