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Text from Valentin-L - English

  • Computer fo the elderly

    • The possesion of a PC have become essential since the last 10 years also for the elderly.
    • There are so much advantages to use a computer.
    • In first , the access of internet is important because it allows us to read and write email.
    • Second they can do shopping what it 's sometimes really difficult due to their reduced mobility.
    • Third old peoples can store photos and send to their family.
    • Moreover more and more elderly play video games .
    • It can be a very good way to have fun and make acquaintance if the game is online.
    • In conclusion know how to use a computer is very positive for the old people

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