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- Hello!I want learn English.Help me please.English need me for my job,and for traveling.

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- Hello!I want learn English.Help me please.English need me for my job,and for traveling.
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- Hello! I want to learn English. Help me please.~~English need me~~ I need to be proficient in English for my job, and for traveling.
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