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Poruka od Miya_Una - English

  • The Story of My Grandfather II

    • *I would be glad if you read "The Story of My Grandfather I (http://polyglotclub.com/language/english/note/6984)" before reading this text.
    • "Please, please don't shoot him!" He said so in Russian.
    • "Oh, you speak Russian," said the soldier, "Then I can't kill you.
    • Well, what can this guy do, then?" "Well, actually, this guy is my partner when making a bridge," said my grandfather, "If you save us both, you can have us do ones." In fact, what he said was nothing but a lie.
  • His colleague was a clerk, not an engineer.
    • The soldier, fortunately, believed his lie and didn't kill them either.
  • To my surprise, there was one more lucky thing.
    • My grandfather didn't know why, but a colonel liked him.
  • The colonel gave him a heavy coat, a silk hat, boots and even a kimono.
    • Although he could survive, a large number of Japanese people, including not only soldiers but also many citizens, who were taken prisoners, were killed or died of the cold or diseases in concentration camps in Siberia.
    • One of his best friends, the person he saved above, also passed away of an infection.
    • About a decade later after the war, the colonel and his wife came to Japan in order to visited my grandfather's house.
    • "I'm so sorry for what happened in the concentration camp," he said, "It's natural that you hate us." My grandfather laughed and replied, "Come on, sir!
  • Don't say such a thing.
    • Hey, why don't we go for some vodka?" Whilst drinking a glass of vodka in a pub, he quietly said to the colonel, "I can't forget what happened there until I die," he put the glass on the table and kept, "--but I can forgive, sir."

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