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Text from sinireri - English

  • Family

    • When it comes to family, I guess everyone become so protective and even cant bare any stranger's opinion about it.
    • However we may sometimes be the person who hurts our family most rather than strangers.
    • Because while we re outside, we have to behave ourselves, depending on our social position, for example if you' re a student you have to show respect to your teacher or if you' re an employee you have to watch your step with your boss, etc. etc. but as long as we are at home we put our social mask off and be ourself and sometimes dont watch our mouths with loved ones.
    • Because deep down we know that no matter what happens they' re not going to let us down.
    • Once in a while, some family members may resent but it will pass.
    • I guess it' s what makes people a family which means putting social masks off, otherwise our significant others or siblings dont bear or stand for us.
    • On the other hand, it does'nt mean that we should treat them like unworthy persons compare to our social superiors.
    • But saying I dont like you to any member of your family in a state of anger doesnt mean that I dont like you. Sorry.

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    • When it comes to family, I guess everyone become so protective and even cant bare any stranger's opinion about it.
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    • When it comes to family, I guess everyone becomes so protective and eventhat they can't beare any stranger's opinion about it.
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    • Because while we re outside, we have to behave ourselves, depending on our social position, for example if you' re a student you have to show respect to your teacher or if you' re an employee you have to watch your step with your boss, etc. etc. but as long as we are at home we put our social mask off and be ourself and sometimes dont watch our mouths with loved ones.
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    • Because wWhile we 're outside, we have to behave ourselves, depending on our social position, f. For example, if you' re a student you have to show respect to your teacher or if you' re an employee you have to watch your step with your boss, etc. etc. bBut as long aswhen we are at home, we puttake off our social mask offs and be ourselfves and sometimes don't watch our mouths with loved ones.
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    • I guess it' s what makes people a family which means putting social masks off, otherwise our significant others or siblings dont bear or stand for us.
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    • I guess it' s what makes people a family which means puttis in removing social masks off, --otherwise our significant others or siblings dont bear orcouldn't stand for us.
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    • But saying I dont like you to any member of your family in a state of anger doesnt mean that I dont like you. Sorry.
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    • But saying "I don't like you " to any member of your family in a state of anger doesn't mean that Iyou don't like youthem. Sorry.
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