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    • A little lecture before English lesson

    • Hello everyone.It's my turn today,and I'm willing to tell you an interesting thing that happened on myself.
    • One day,I was chatting with a lovely lady.You know why I say so?
    • she called me "my little cute kind sister".
    • I replied:"Oh.You are the first one who call me like this." She sent me a smile face and said:"You are my little cute kind kid sister." I didn't know what to say, really.Should I say:"Oh great my dear pretty lovely adult sister"?
    • So I typed:"Good,my longest nickname." She sent a laughing face to me and explained:"You have only sixteen"a laugh,"so I have 30.so you are my little cute kind kid sister." Me:"Yes, very logic." She laughed and said "ok I'm leaving now.bye take care." I said:"bye".
    • I thought that it's the end,I guess that you think so.
    • But I was wrong,I will show you what happened.(show a screen printing).

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    • I replied:"Oh.You are the first one who call me like this." She sent me a smile face and said:"You are my little cute kind kid sister." I didn't know what to say, really.Should I say:"Oh great my dear pretty lovely adult sister"?
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    • I replied:,"Oh.Y, you are the first one who call meto ever tell me something like thisat." She sent me a smiley face and said:, "You are my cute, little cute, kind, kid sister." I didreally don't know what to say, really. Should I say:"Oh "Your so great my dear, pretty, lovely adult sister"?"
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    • So I typed:"Good,my longest nickname." She sent a laughing face to me and explained:"You have only sixteen"a laugh,"so I have 30.so you are my little cute kind kid sister." Me:"Yes, very logic." She laughed and said "ok I'm leaving now.bye take care." I said:"bye".
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    • So I typed:said, "Good, my longest nickname."¶She sent a laughing face to me and explained:,"You havare only sixteen"a she laugh,"so I have s "And I am 30.s So you are my cute, little cute, kind kid sister."¶Me:"Yes, that's very logical."¶She laughed and said, "okOk, I'm leaving now.b Bye, take care."¶I said:"bBye"."
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