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Should Teenagers Work While They Are Students?
- The issue I will discuss is whether or not teenagers should work while they are students.
- From my point of view, teenagers should not work while they are students.
- Due to the need of concentrating on their studies.
- And getting better grades, and enhancing their knowledge.
- First, I truly believe that teenagers shouldn’t work while they are still students; this is so important because lots of teenagers cannot focus on both of the two tasks.
- An example would be when a student is working while studying; he will face lots of difficulties like cooperating between them.
- And he cannot study or work efficiently.
- Thus it would cause him to drop one of the two, and unfortunately most of the students drop their studies, because of the need to money.
- Second, I think when students work while they are studying; they will get lower grades.
- This it could be from the extra work they got from their bosses and the work that they have not finished it yet can occupy all their time.
- And the exhaustion that caused by their heavy works.
- In this way it will affect their grades.
- And it can cause them to fail.
- Lastly, some students claim that they need money to cover the tuition fees and other stuff, so they need to get part-time job.
- But I believe there are other ways to get money without working.
- For example student can enroll in the financial aid which their schools are providing.
- Or get support from loads of companies who are willing to support students.
- By these they will focus all their time on their studies, and enhancing their knowledge.
- So when they will finish their studies, they will get better jobs with high payment.
- In conclusion, money is necessary for life, but students should not miss their classes, in order to get some money.
- BrockySeptember 2013Vote agora!
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