添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

sinireriからのテキスト - English

  • Criticism

  • Today, I want to express my thoughts about a question I read in a book which asks whether I always think it's wise to declare my future plans to other people or not.
  • Just because I have come across this case a lot till now, it attracted my attention at once.
  • As most of my youthfulness passed among judgemental people, I know what it feels like to be critisized or even mocked just because of your thoughts, opinions or future plans.
    • People can be very cruel in terms of criticizing.
    • That' s why you learn not to share your plans and keep them for yourself , otherwise no matter how logical may your plans be, you will be mocked severely.
  • However grown people should be compassionate and pragmatic when it comes talking to adolescents.
  • Depending on ones character some can deal with criticism and make the most of it on the other hand, most adolescent hesitate to express their opinions later in their life and turn into reserved people.
  • Consequently, we should think twice before tell one about our future plans otherwise they can create irreparable damages to our characters and we regret.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English