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my virtual friend
Six months ago I met a friend on the web to improve my english.
We made exchanges each day about the politic, the cinema, our jobs, our families and everything in a daily life. It was great.
He is a wonderful and smart man.
Now he was gone.
He can't talk with me. I'm so sad.
- He disappeared like a soap bubble.

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- my virtual friend
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- Six months ago I met a friend on the web to improve my english.
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Sentence 2
- We made exchanges each day about the politic, the cinema, our jobs, our families and everything in a daily life. It was great.
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- He is a wonderful and smart man.
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- Now he was gone.
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- He can't talk with me. I'm so sad.
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- He disappeared like a soap bubble.
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- He disappeared like a ~~soap~~ bubble of soap.
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