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- looking for my business english teacher!
- hello everybody, i'm looking for a person available to dedicate me some message and talk me about her/his job!
- specially if he/she is an accounter or if work in financial/accounting.
- I need to improve my business english and further to do a perfect c.v. :) ...
- I hope in yours disposability!!

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- looking for my business english teacher!
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- I am looking for my business english teacher!
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- I'm looking for ~~my business english teacher!~~ a available personn...¶I need to improve my English and further to do perfectly
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- hello everybody, i'm looking for a person available to dedicate me some message and talk me about her/his job!
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- hello everybody, ¶iI'm looking for a person available to ~~dedicate~~spend time with me: soend me messages and talk to me about her/his job!
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- hHello everybody, ¶iI'm looking for a person available to ~~dedicate~~send me some messages, and talk to me about her/ or his job!
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- hHello every~~body~~one, ¶iI'm looking for a person ~~available to dedicate me some message and talk~~who would be available to talk to me about their~~/his~~ job!.
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- hHello every~~body, ¶i'~~one, I am looking for ~~a person available to dedicate me some~~someone who is available to send messages and talk with me about their~~/his~~ job!
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- specially if he/she is an accounter or if work in financial/accounting.
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- I need to improve my business english and further to do a perfect c.v. :) ...
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- I need to improve my business english and ~~further to do~~also write a perfect c.v. :)¶¶...
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- I need to improve my business eEnglish and ~~further to do a perfect c.v. :)¶¶..~~to update my CV.
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- I hope in yours disposability!!
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- I ~~hope in yours disposability!!~~am waiting for your reply.
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- ~~I hope in yours disposability!!~~Gleidy- I don't know how to send you a personal message, but if you have an English c.v. I can try to help you make corrections... I studied business and took a couple of accounting courses. If you'd like you can email me at lrogers4 @ gmail . com
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looking for my business english teacher!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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