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- I would like make a travel in France.
- I'm not traleling in other country.
- For my first travel, I want to go in France because the language it's same of mine.
- After, when I easy for travel, I going to go an country english.

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- I would like make a travel in France.
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- I would like ~~make a~~to travel into France.
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- I'm not traleling in other country.
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- I~~'m not~~ have never been tralveling in to another country.
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- I~~'m not traleling in~~ have never traveled to another country.
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- For my first travel, I want to go in France because the language it's same of mine.
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- For my first travel, I want to go into France because ~~the language it's same of~~it have the same language as mine.
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- ~~For my first~~The first time I travel, I want to go into France because the language ~~it's~~spoken is the same ofas mine.
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- After, when I easy for travel, I going to go an country english.
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- After that, when I ~~easy~~feel comfortable for travel, I am going to go ~~an countr~~to any eEnglish. country.
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- After~~, when I easy for~~ I visit France and I feel more comfortable traveling, I ~~going to go an country english~~want to visit an English speaking country.
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