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Tekst fra Juldyro - English

  • CAE- writing (part2)

  • ...In my district, the public transport means a lot for inhabitants.
    • As I live in suburb of Torun (city in Poland), I and majority of people have to commute by bus.
    • I couldn't imagine my life without the public transport.
    • I can't afford to buy a car, so I couldn't get to my workplace otherwise I hitch a ride.
  • Even though the public means of transport is in demand, some of the people have never used it.
    • They have been told that buses are dirty and it is easy to catch a cold there.
  • A few people claim that the buses are full of pickpockets.
    • To improve the public transport in my area, the old buses should be replaced.
  • The camera monitoring should be introduce.
  • Above all the public transport should be cleaner and safer.
  • Thank you very much.
    • I know that I exceed the word limit.
    • But I haven't been aware of word restriction.

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