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Text from MohamedRizk4sci - English

    • The importance of communications

    • In the begging, communications very useful nowadays. we use communications in most of our day. we depend on it; it makes our lives easy.
    • In my point of view, communications is important for these reasons.
    • First, we use mobile phone all time in work, home, and others places; may be all time and all places.
    • There are many use of mobile phone sending SMS, makes calls, and browsing internet.
    • Second, The powerful way of using communications is the internet.
    • All world connecting with each other by huge network can transfer and receive any kind of digital data.
    • You can brows web, chat with friends, transfer or receive files, watching movies, watching to live broadcast and etc. Third, the satellites are a way to transfer TV channels. we use satellites not only to receive TV channels but also transfer digital data like the internet. satellites are also used to connect satellite phones.
    • Finally, I would like to say that, we use communications all time.
    • It makes our lives more faster.

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