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  • Write an email to ask some advice about your new purchase of c

    • Dear Jacques, I’m writing you to ask some advice, but first i hope you’re good, this is a long time that i haven’t had some news about you, what do you become ? how is your new job ? let me know quickly.
    • So i don’t remmeber if i had said that, but i want to buy a new car, but you know me…i’m too bad on this topic ! you can speak with me about sport or travel, but for the cars….
    • I would buy a big car, because i have had three childrens with Isabel and our currently car is too small now…I have seen a lot of kind of cars which would be good but i need your point of view.
  • French car ?, american car ?
    • I don’t know, i don’t want a sportive car, i prefer comfortable car, it’s better for me and my family.
    • And other question, if i want to sell my car, it’s a Megan from Renault, how much i will sell it ?
    • If my memory is good you have sold this kind of car there were two years ago.
    • In short i wait your advice, i look forward to hearing you.
  • Best regards my friend

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    • Dear Jacques, I’m writing you to ask some advice, but first i hope you’re good, this is a long time that i haven’t had some news about you, what do you become ? how is your new job ? let me know quickly.
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    • Dear Jacques,¶¶I’m writing you to ask some advice, but first iI hope you’re good, this ifine. It's a long time that iI haven’t had some newseard about you, what dohave you become ? hHow is your new job ? lLet me know quickly.
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    • So i don’t remmeber if i had said that, but i want to buy a new car, but you know me…i’m too bad on this topic ! you can speak with me about sport or travel, but for the cars….
      투표하세요!
    • So iI don’t remmeber if iI had said thait, but iI want to buy a new car, but y. You know me…iI’m too bad on this topic ! yYou can speak with me about sport or travelling, but for the cars….
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    • I would buy a big car, because i have had three childrens with Isabel and our currently car is too small now…I have seen a lot of kind of cars which would be good but i need your point of view.
      투표하세요!
    • I would like to buy a big car, because iI have had three childrens with Isabel and our currently car is too small now… I have seen a lot ofvarious kinds of cars which would be goodsuitable, but iI need your point of view.
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    • I don’t know, i don’t want a sportive car, i prefer comfortable car, it’s better for me and my family.
      투표하세요!
    • I don’t know, iI don’t want a sportive car, iI prefer some comfortable car, it’s better for me and my family.
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    • And other question, if i want to sell my car, it’s a Megan from Renault, how much i will sell it ?
      투표하세요!
    • And other question, if i want to sell my car, it’s a Megan from Renault, how much i will sell itI should sell it for how much ?
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